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Britt H. aka Mika's avatar

I love how you end this part of the story. It drew us in even more wanting to know more.

Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Mimi, “Nor I you” turns Jack’s gratitude into Phillip’s confession that helping his son escape also repays a debt carried from Jacqueline. The secret wedding, George’s gallows humor, and the passage hidden inside the sarcophagus give the chapter urgency while preserving its family warmth. Albert’s blood-marked discovery widens the danger beyond the chapel, so Jack and Enid’s happiness feels protected for only a few breaths. Thank you for letting Phillip’s love become decisive action at the exact moment war begins closing the roads.

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